half an hour ago, I received another request for a partial from a
literary agency. Brenda, I have to say a huge thanks. If it hadn't been
for your advice on restructuring chapter one of my manuscript, none of
this interest would be possible. I now have three agents and one
publisher all interested in reading more.
"If you're reading this post and have suffered rejection in the past, but think your WIP is worthy of publication, I would recommend Brenda's service and suggest you have your first chapter reviewed by her for a small fee as I did. It's worth every cent and you certainly won't regret it."
writing as Victoria Howard
Pushcart Prize nominee
"Brenda Hill has helped me with several writing projects. She offers invaluable advice and editorial critique to help me present my best possible writing. I would recommend her services to anyone."
Spur Award winning author
"Brenda Hill's knowledge is extensive. She has a talent for spotting sentence structure errors and word usage problems. She also has a keen eye for strong writing."
A Thousand Kisses Deep and The Spy Wore Red
Writer of the Year
Midwest Fiction Writers
"I attended a workshop Brenda conducted for the Palm Springs Writers' Guild and it was very helpful. The workshop was about the important first page and it really opened my eyes. Any aspiring writer will benefit from Brenda's workshops. She is entertaining and insightful."
Palm Springs Writers' Guild
"Your class on "Critical First Chapter" was so helpful. It's now engrained in my writer's mind how important that is. Grab the reader while he's looking at your book, and you have a follower for life.”
Author of: A Broad Abroad in Thailand,
A Broad Abroad in Iran
Jim McFarlin, President
Palm Springs Writers Guild
“A good workshop should be informative, practical, and well organized. Brenda Hill’s 1st Chapter Workshop met the criteria in every aspect. I was motivated to look carefully at the first chapter of each of my novels and implement Hill’s advice.”
Author of Desert Soliloquy
"Brenda provided valuable insight that proved instrumental in the publication and success of my first novel, The Burning Hills. She has a keen eye for a good story, understands sound literary structure and pays attention to detail. I welcome her input on my work anytime."
The Burning Hills
Sherri Cook Woosley